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What You Deserve by *anedz:iconanedz:

Categories Literature > Poetry > Romantic > Teen or Young Romance > Open


I never thought I would regret you.
It simply didn't work out,
but now I am ashamed to admit
that I ever thought of you,
liked you,
dated you,
kissed you.

You are a player-
an accessory to lies.
Were you always like this
or was I just blind,
unable to see what you truly were?

Illogical.
Yearning only for your own satisfaction.
Using whatever means necessary.
Twisting the truth.

I hope that someday you grow up,
realize what you are doing,
and regret it
because that is what
you deserve.
©2008-2009 *anedz
:iconanedz:

Author's Comments

yes this is cruel...
written as train-of-thought

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=CrimsonThrenody Apr 9, 2008, 5:04:00 PM
:hug: Feeling a bit aggravated? :lol:

Though, I can understand they sentiment.

--
:heart:Words are my paint, and the pen is my brush:heart:

~ *getLIT ~*WordCount ~ *Adopt-A-Writer ~ *Writers-Workshop ~
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*speakyourmind Apr 9, 2008, 5:32:37 PM
You are a player-
an accessory to lies.
Were you always like this
or was I just blind,


really like this line


:D

--
Any beautiful moment captured forever... THAT is true art.
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*anedz Apr 9, 2008, 5:55:30 PM
Well thank you very much for the favorite! and the hug!

--
"At a very early period she had apprehended instinctively the dual life- that outward existence which conforms, the inward life which questions" - The Awakening by Kate Chopin
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*anedz Apr 9, 2008, 5:55:47 PM
thanks sweetie :hug:

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"At a very early period she had apprehended instinctively the dual life- that outward existence which conforms, the inward life which questions" - The Awakening by Kate Chopin
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~felixwarrior13 Apr 9, 2008, 5:56:45 PM
I wouldn't call it "cruel" so much as "venting" or something like that...

But yes, good poem, I enjoyed reading it a second time as the finished version. :)
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~tieshalynn Apr 9, 2008, 8:15:46 PM
i agree with courtney..that's probably my favorite line as well. and on the subject of this subject, i do believe i agree with you. and i'm really liking your angry writing as opposed to the sweet stuff =D good job love :glomp:>>i just glomped you :O

--
I've heard it said that people come into our lives for a reason bringing something we must learn and we are led to those who help us most to grow if we let them and we help them in return ~wicked
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*anedz Apr 10, 2008, 5:00:36 AM
lol i feel loved

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"At a very early period she had apprehended instinctively the dual life- that outward existence which conforms, the inward life which questions" - The Awakening by Kate Chopin
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*missmissa07 Apr 10, 2008, 7:56:35 AM
I agree with Tiesha. I love both styles of your writing, but your anger just outweighs the loving side - I guess just because it has so much more emotion behind it (in my opinion, hatred is a much stronger emotion than infatuation =)). But either way, I love this poem, and at least you got a great poem from the relationship, I guess? *tries to be an optimist*

:love:

--
I've seen the best of love, the best of hate,
The best reward is earned,
I've paid for every single word I've ever said.
:iconanedz:
*anedz Apr 10, 2008, 12:09:14 PM
lol i love you missa!

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"At a very early period she had apprehended instinctively the dual life- that outward existence which conforms, the inward life which questions" - The Awakening by Kate Chopin
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